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Jarrit was starting to come around, he wa still groggy from the effects of the chlorophorm.

As his mind was going through the past events, his body was realizing he was restrained on an X
frame and he was elevated off the floor.

"Hey is anyone there, HELP let me out of here." Jarrit yelled to no avail.

Jarrit started to try breaking free, after 15 minutes he realized it was futile. He was completely
helpless, at the mercy of some sadistic plot by people he didn't know.

"Well well I see you're awake." The smaller man who was the second assailant said.

He was still weaing his ski mask completely veiled in mystery.

"What's this all about you creep? Why am I here?"

"I'll ask the questions here boy, I suggest you start cooperating or else."

"Seriously, the or else line. Am I in some crappy torture scene or something?" Jarrit said.

"Hmmm joke while you can, if you don't answer my questions you'll be too occupied to make
jokes."

"I'll never give into the likes of you pal."

Jarrit's captor started walking closer to the bound teen with an unseen evil grin on his face.

"Are you sure you don't want to change your mind?" As the man said this he started lightly
stroking the tops of Jarrit's bare feet.

"AHJHHHAAAAHAAANOHEHEHAEAHAHANOTEHAAEAAEHTHATEHEAAAAEHYOUHEAAEHAASSAAHEA"

Jarrit was so ticklsh, he couldn't stop the ensuing tickle attack on the tops of his poor tootsies.

"Jarrit I can do this as long as it takes and it'll only get worse." He then left Jarrit's feet and started
lightly tickling in the hollows of Jarrit's exposed pits.

'EAEAEAEAHEAAAAHAAEHAHAEOHEHAEHAAAHSHITHEHAEAAAEHEAEATHISHEHAEAAISEHAHAE
SOEHEAEAEHAEAAHAEWRONGEHAAAHAHHHAAHAEHAHEITEEEAAEAHAHEHAEEHAAHAEATICKLES
EHAAAAEHAHAEAASOEEAAEHAAEAEAAHAHHAEMUCHEAAEHAAEHAHAA." Jarrit was squirming and
jerking as much as he could, which was very little.

Just then the tormentor stopped and picked up a feather and twirled it in Jarrit's belly button. At
the same time he was tickling behind Jarrit's knees with another feather.

"FUCKEHEHAEAAAHEAHAENOTHEAEAHAHAEHAHAMYEEEAAHEAEHEEAEHKNEESEHEHEAAANDEAHA
EHAEHAANDEHAAEHEHAABELLYEHAHAEHEBUTTONEHAEHAAHEHYOUEAHAEEAAAHFIENDAAEHEAAH
EHHAHAHAEJUSTEHAAEAWAITHEAAATILLEHEHAHAIEHAEAAGETEHAHAEAHEAHALOOSE."

Jarrit was starting to lose any composure he had, he was sweating and completely in tickle hell.

"So are you ready to talk, or do you need more persuasion?"

"HEEAAHAHAAHEHAAAI'llEAEHAHEAHAAEHNEVEREHAEAHABRAKEAEHEAHEHEAAASSHOLEEAEEAEH
EHAHAEHEAEAHEAEAA."

"Ok Jarrit up till now I've gone easy on you, but you leave me no choice."

Suddenly Jarrit was blindfolded by another person who came up behind him. Now Jarrit could hear
nothing and see nothing. All the suspense was getting to him.

Then from out of nowhere four hands assaulted Jarrit's exposed ticklish spots at the same time.

"EAEAAAEAHASHITEHAEAAAEAEAHAEAAAHHAI'MEEAEAEEHAEHAAEEHATOOEHAEAAHAHATICKLISH
EHAAAAHAAEHAFOREAEAATHISEHAEHAEATORTURE."

One pair of hands was tickling between Jarrit's pits, ribs, sides, knees, belly button, and neck. As
another pair was tickling the soles and tops of Jarrit's feet, as well as his legs.

"EHAEAEHHEAHAEHAAEEAAEAEHAEHAAAEHAHEHETHISEHAAEEAEEASCKSEEHAHEAEHEHAEAAEH
EAAAEHEEAAYOU'LLEHAAAAHEAEAHAHEAHAEPAYEAEAAAHAFOREHAAAAEAATHISEHAEHEAEAEAE
JUSTEHAEEAEAEAHAWAITEHAEAAAHAAHAEAHEAHAHAE."

Jarrit lasted another hour of continous tickling before he couldn't take it anymore.

"EAAAAEEAAHEEAAEHAEOKEEAHAHAEAAHOKEAEEHAAEHYOUEEAAHAAEHWINEHAEAHAAIEHEHE
HEHAEAAHEAHAGIVEAEAEAHAEAAAI'LLEHAAEHEAAETALKEAEEHAEEHAAA."

Just then the two hands stopped tickling and the blindfold was lifted.

"Ok Jarrit first thing I must say for such a ticklish guy, you lasted quite a long time. Now secondly
I have one thing to say to you."

"What's that?"

"Happy Birthday."

After saying that, Jarrit's captor took off his mask.

Jarrit's jaw dropped and his eyes almost popped out of their sockets. suddenly he was looking at
the smiling face of Shane.

"Shane what the, it was you the whole time?"

"Yep, I was racking my brain all month trying to figure out how to give you an unforgettable birth-
day. I mean you only turn 18 once."

"Oh my god, with all the excitement I completely forgot it was my birthday today."

Just then the other bigger captor came out from the shadows and took off his mask.

"Happy Birthday Jarrit I hope you're not freaked out, Shane talked me into this and I just couldn't
resist."

The other captor turned out to be Cam, the supposed source Jarrit met the other night.

"So there was no story at all, this was just a plot for my birthday?" Jarrit asked as Cam was getting
the cuffs off Jarrit.

"Yep pretty awesome huh?" Shane said

"Oh one more thing, look up in the corners."

Just then Jarrit noticed a couple of cameras.

"Jarrit, you are now the star of your own tickle vdeo." Shane said giving Jarrit a hug.

"You're the best friend I could ever have Shane, thanks for truly making this a birthday I will never
forget. I love you bro."

"I loved doing this for you Jarr, by the way Cam and I really are dating. He's also into tickling and is ticklish as you found out."

"Well then, I think the three of us will have a lot more fun, Cam are you gonna move in wth us?
There's more than enough room."

"I thought you'd never ask Jarrit, I'd love to." Cam said embracing both Jarrit and Shane.

"Oh one more thing Shane."

"What's that?"

"This" Jarrit said tackling Shane to the floor and kneading his fingers between his ribs and into his
pits. "Payback's a bitch."

"EAHEAHEAHHAHAEASHITEHAEHAHAAEHAEHAAANOTHEEAAAAHATHEREEHEAEAAACAMEAAEHAEH
HEAEAAHHELPEHAAAAEHMEEHEAHAEAE."

"Sure Shane, I'll help you." Cam said as he straddled Shane's legs and took off his flip flops
scratching his nails along Shae's bare soles.

"EHAHAAAEHHAAAAAHAHHHHHAAHEAEHAHANOEHAEAAEHAEHEHHFAIREAEAEHTWOEHAEAGAINST
EEHAEHAEEAAEAONE.EAAEAAAAAHEAHAHOWEAHEAAAAREAEAEAEAHAYOUHEAAEAEAEHELPING
EAEAEHAEAEAHAEAMEAAEHAAEHACAM."

"I'm helping you laugh more of course."

The End.
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:iconpokemone1:
pokemone1 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow plot twist at the ending I didn't expect that!Really good story and I feel like im commenting on way to many of your stories...
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Ticklishboy30 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
LOL it's all good, I'm glad you enjoy them. They've been a blast to write. ;)
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pokemone1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
^-^
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marleme Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
nice story!
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Ticklishboy30 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Thanks, I had fun coming up with it. I thought the mystery angle would be a change from what I'd been reading. :)

Blessed Be
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